Your city has decided to build a monument to honor a famous person in your country. Whom would you choose. Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
Definitely, a brilliant personality that comes to mind is Renato Russo, would be a good idea to build a monument of him in my city, for sure. He was much more than a singer, he was a poet, his songs were completely full of poems about love, peace, history, politics etc. He always used a lot of metaphors in his writing to convey his thoughts.
His music caught on the entire country in a revolutionary era, called “ditadura militar”- that happened in Brazil in 70’s, at this time the country was on militaries command. It was an era marked by repression, people could not do what they wanted, there was not freedom expression. For example, television was controlled by militaries and could convey only the information previously approved by them. People were beaten daily because they do not agree with the decisions made by the government. It was a terrible time for the country.
By the time, as it was on TV, the lyrics of the songs were also repressed because the singers were not able to composed lyrics about, homosexuality, racism, gender bias, politics or things like that. But, Renato Russo wrote a lot of lyrics about what was happening at the time, just by using metaphors. It was amazingly well done which even the governments employees did not know about what he was singing. But of course the people realized that and understood the meaning of the song.
Also, Renato Russo added a lot of good thoughts for Brazilian literature. For example, when I was in high school in 2006, I remember that we discuss in a literature class three or four lyrics from Renato Russo, everyone in the class enjoyed this day. Even today his poems and lyrics are in the literature books and probably the new generation will know him.
Unfortunately, he killed himself in 1996. But today yet, young people know his songs, there are a lot of covers of him that make concerts in the country, they are usually trying to imitate his incredible voice and performance on the stage by singing his amazing songs.
For those reasons, I feel that will be so amazing represents Renato Russo in this monument, because everybody loves him. Certainly, people in country will want to come here to look closely and take pictures with the build.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, for example, i feel, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79434447301 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65557303046 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54498714653 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6093883528 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1578947368 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0373784500408 0.236089414692 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0142758104059 0.076458572812 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247650735088 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228117615341 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220178750185 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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