You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing; express concern about the missing card and ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding to a problem I have just encountered with your bank’s service. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why this course of action should be realized.
I registered using a credit card with cash back allowance at your office last month. According to your procedure, a sealed envelope with a new card and letter would be sent to my address to promptly activate the service. Unfortunately, I received the package without a card inside and this, as I am sure your can understand, was both tedious and despondent for me.
Furthermore, I am planning to travel next week and have just found out that I will be only able to do this unless I get the credit card in my wallet. This trip is a surprise gift for my ten year wedding anniversary and I hope you can grasp the severity of the situation I experienced. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action by issuing alternative card and the prime delivery mode with free of charge for my package to receive the purchase within two days.
Your timely attention to this matter is needed,
Haki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as both tedious and despondent for me. Furthermore, I am planning to travel nex...
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ention to this matter is needed, Haki
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62755102041 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72081365534 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7087604846 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217513469313 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084682529293 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479700572629 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124026867072 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492213719634 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.