Some people prefer working for a business. Others would rather own a business. Discuss both.
A considerable number of people assert that it is better to be employed with a company as it provides a certain degree of job security. As far as I am concerned, the merits and drawbacks of both views must be pondered upon prior to advocating one.
On the one hand, there may be certain advantages associated with working for a business. For one thing, many companies offer their staff a certain minimum income, and this gives a considerable degree of comfort to many people to afford their rent and bills. However, there are, indeed, disadvantages galore inherent in working for a business. To begin with, employment with a company is considered a venom to ambition and creativity. Moreover, many employees are stuck with the same company for a significant period of time to get their wages. They may, for instance, have taken out a mortgage to pay or maybe worried about paying their car finance.
On the other hand, just as working for a business, having a business has its own drawbacks. The critics believe that it makes them vulnerable in a highly capricious economy. Yet, this seemingly serious problem can be best overshadowed by numerous benefits self-employment can bring to a businessman. For example, by running a company, an individual can dedicate his entire time and effort to increase the company’s financial health. That way, the company grow gigantically, and this can make it untouchable by the foregoing economic and political turmoil.
All in all, I am of the adamant view that the latter holds merit. I take this view on account in a fit of the fact that despite some disadvantages raised, the merits galore inherent to self-employment far outweigh the aforementioned flaws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...with the same company for a significant period of time to get their wages. They may, for insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0125907942 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3237347451 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182557358118 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648556520271 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091561692496 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870450978457 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527615753107 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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