Many people these days choose to work abroad after graduation. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.
The tendency of working overseas after graduation is increasingly prevalent to the young generation. In my opinion, while there are certain benefits, its drawbacks are more significant.
As the world has been globalized, people prefer working in a foreign country, and this could have a positive effect on people’s lives to some extent. Being able to work overseas, people can make friends with foreigners so they could build a stronger social relationship, which can be easily achieved by actively communicating with others. Furthermore, so-called relationships facilitate people to perform better in the workplace as the behaviors of other colleagues are the primary influence. It means that if people are working with those who are punctual and disciplined, they will be easily affected by these manners.
However, apart from the benefits expressed above, I believe that the option of working abroad is perhaps even more damaging because of the effect of language barriers. Individuals, who work in a foreign country, often find it extremely difficult to express their thoughts and feelings as a result of talking different languages. For example, in a discussion, if ones are not proficient at speaking English or any foreign language, they might not make a contribution or point out any mistakes from others. This hurdle is also associated with reduced quality and performance among people at work. Another disadvantage caused by language barriers is that this difficulty could make foreigners misunderstand what people say in some contexts. This leads to reduced human interaction among people.
In conclusion, although the option of working aboard is becoming popular among people today, I believe that the downsides of this trend would overshadow the benefits.
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- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49090909091 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9797864475 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6933512087 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197569289744 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706449014943 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468018649233 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115797101077 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03061794578 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.