:- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
The discussion on there are social, medical and technology problems associated with the use of mobile phone is debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their arguments. The subject attracts majority of view from people and remain a hot topic people of concern. In this essay, I shall scrutinize both points of view by providing some relevant examples and explanation before drawing any conclusion.
Another pivotal aspect on now day many technology things is increasing day by day is that which is more fine. It is worth perceiving that there are so many type of beneficial for us. The strength of such an approach is that modern technology such as smart phone. The most prominent example could be provided here is 80% people work on smart phone and they are time save more after, it is apparent why there are some advantages of smart phone and supportive reason is justified.
Those who disagree are against these ideas and might have cogentnation and could assert that in these smart phone technology is increasing time by time. Another angle on the debate suggests that before all people do like smart phone but some people do not like to smart phone. The most pertiment example could be providing some relevant example here is 60% children use to smart phone full day with this put bed effects on study more after, it is apparent why the smart phone technology is not best in students life and my supportive reason is justified.
All in all the smart phone technology is more fine in human life because
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| 2019-09-10 | sivaprasadraj | 77 | view |
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- Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both opinion and give example. 62
- There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phone. do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 55
- Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don't need. Give your opinion about this practice. 55
- The newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society. What is your opinion? 77
- Any invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ology things is increasing day by day is that which is more fine. It is worth per...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...t is worth perceiving that there are so many type of beneficial for us. The strength of s...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e relevant example here is 60% children use to smart phone full day with this put b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.5418719212 218% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81060606061 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45985910069 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507575757576 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5290676208 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 7.25397266985 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061341442066 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027430427904 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239632350969 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400166602312 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122125760529 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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