you are looking for a full-time job. write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
Introduce Yourself
Explain what sort of jobs do you would like.
say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greeting and I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am Peter Evans from Wembley, London. I have done MBA from London business school in 2016 and I worked in Sainsbury for 2 years.
After high school, my keen interest was in business studies, so I enrolled in business management in graduation and masters. So, I am seeking a similar kind of job opportunity. The role, I prefer is more of client interactions and presentations on products or services majorly deals with sales. Planning strategies for increasing sales revenue, product development, adding and retaining the clients.
I worked as a business development executive. I am good at lead generations and customizing proposals for clients according to their requirements and organizing for client engagements. Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Satisfaction and job security is concern than salary. Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Your’s sincerely,
Peter Evans.
- A large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make inquiries about the financial aspect. 67
- In some countries governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 79
- Facing many international pollution issues such as the energy shortage and global warming some people believe that individuals have limited abilities to deal with that issue compared with the nations and society To what extent do you agree or disagree 57
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologizedescribe what action you will take 61
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time Discuss two views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
.... Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Sat...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Your's sincerely, Peter Evans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29447852761 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09608750491 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2241134411 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3846153846 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167611309876 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530693919964 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051114959497 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908194446172 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050504872174 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.