You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. in your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greeting and I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am Peter Evans. I live in Wembley, London. I have done MBA from London business school in 2016 and I worked in Sainsbury for 2 years.
After high school, my keen interest was in business studies, so I enrolled in business management in graduation and masters. So, I am seeking a similar kind of job opportunity. The role, I prefer is more of client interactions and presentations on products or services majorly deals with sales. Planning strategies for increasing sales revenue, product development, adding and retaining the clients.
I worked as a business development executive. I am good at lead generations and customizing proposals for clients according to their requirements and organizing for client engagements. Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Satisfaction and job security is concern than salary. Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Your’s sincerely,
Peter Evans.
- Large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make enquiries about financial aspect. 87
- Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information are incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. In the letter, you should: – explain that an article contains wrong information 89
- Facing many international pollution issues such as the energy shortage and global warming some people believe that individuals have limited abilities to deal with that issue compared with the nations and society To what extent do you agree or disagree 57
- Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour Therefore the working hours should be reduced To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Peter Evans. I live in Wembley, London. I have done MBA from London business scho...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
.... Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Sat...
^^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Your's sincerely, Peter Evans.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10474621118 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709090909091 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3166264853 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0714285714 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7857142857 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144166127024 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424633854003 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413974369721 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886505432636 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483857339211 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.