Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that will affect your daily life.
News informs people about the various issues, and individuals are free to decide on the type of news they want to follow. The prompt asks whether it is crucial to catch up the entire events occur around the world or not. I personally believe that it is a decent idea to follow the whole events, In what follows, I will list the most conspicuous reasons which give adherence to my standpoint.
The first striking reason which should be considered is that any event in abroad can directly or indirectly affect a person's country too. Indeed, according to the globalization of countries, all of them are interconnected to each other, while some connection is in a friendly way, others are based on haterade. No matter what is the type of this connection, the existence of connection affects all countries simultaneously. A lucid example which could shed the highlight in this fact is the war of Iraq and Iran, although it was between two countries and it would not have any threaten for other countries and their border; after the ceasefire there were lost of soldier who injured during the fight and neither Iran nor Iraq was not capable of treating them. Therefore, lots of injured migrated from these countries to other countries such as Austria or Germany to get health treatment. This migration absolutely had effected those countries at that time. Therefore, informing about the universal events is important to get prepare for the possible consequence of those events.
Another equally important reason which should be considered is the possibility of the repetition of the same event. In another word, maybe that specific event discussed in the news does not influence people's life who is watching it; but there is the feasibility of occurrence of an identical situation for them. In this scenario, by watching and getting some idea about the event and methods of handling or dealing it are beneficial. According to the noteworthy, intelligent study conducted in the Psychology Department in the University of Tehran in Iran, the pre-awareness about the event before it happens, make an individual be approximately thirty-five percent prepared for that condition. Consequently, if a person has some idea about the topic, his reaction toward that issue would contain fewer mistakes and failures. So, getting informed about the events occurred in the universe is a stage of pre-preparation for a possible event.
However, some groups may believe that persuading the irrelevant news is a waste of time since it does not provide significant information. While this attitude at the first glance can appear reasonable, it overlooks a subtle point that even the irrelevant news boosts the general understanding of people. For instance, maybe a person's field of interest is not medicine and any topic about this field seems useless for him, any information about the medical field and its achievements provide some background for that person, and he could enhance it personal health status according to this background. Thus, the apparently irrelevant news causes the enhancement of people healthy life.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons explicitly illustrate that getting information about the entire news is advantageous, since whole countries are connected and a local event can have a universal effect, the same issue can occur again; moreover, it boosts the general knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2847.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17636363636 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89866369896 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521818181818 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 902.7 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2074675317 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.571428571 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1904761905 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125549231193 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427379142172 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324284877217 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739071256248 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383821319716 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.