People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The generation nowadays is far different from the life before and people are more exposed to the increasing demands of life. While some say that the only option they can have is to move to rural areas and start a new life, I am of the opinion that they must be adaptive to this constant change. Certain measures can be effectively taken for them to cope with issues at hand.
One of the problems people have is the high standard of life they have to put up with such as the cost of living in urban areas and the time they have for work. These lead a person to be more stressed and unable to cope up with other aspects of life. In addition to this, their security and safety is at risk because they are more inclined to be influenced by certain vices and harmful diversional activities present within the society. This is rampant in the areas in the BPO industry where workers engage themselves in the usage of prohibited drugs, drinking alcoholic beverages and multiple sexual activities. As a result, they become unproductive and at risk to serious illnesses.
However, it is never an option to leave the life in the city and move to the countryside. There are things that can help these career-minded individuals to cope up with the demands of the city life. They can take the time off and go on vacation leaves. This does not only refresh them, but this could also provide them an opportunity to explore the beauty of nature. Furthermore, they can practice time management and engage in sports activities apart from work. For instance, they can go to sports complex to do jogging or train for obstacle course racing as such activities helps them to be healthy and strong rather than having vices.
As a whole, having a life in the city can be debilitating especially when one cannot cope with the increasing demands being asked. However, certain options may be applied to aid an individual to survive the challenges in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...from work. For instance, they can go to sports complex to do jogging or train for obst...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 344.0 196.424390244 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65697674419 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52940388063 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 106.607317073 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 283.868780488 184% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1946436108 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117235509634 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420515248071 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504351525761 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774429040467 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240274791917 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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