Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience
Children find different ways to indulge themselves for leisure activities. some young children play outdoor games while others find online and computer games more entertaining. however, is it more recommendable for them to take up activities that will eventually help them in their studies? In my opinion, striking a right balance between educational and recreational activity for free time will be the ideal.
To begin with, children should primarily look for purpose in their play time to build healthy habits which might contribute to their education in some way.It goes without saying that many educational applications on the android which have online games are customised to help children in learning useful skills. For examples, apps such as Livemocha and Italki teach students different minute elements of a foreign language while providing with the thrill they want at the same time. Moreover, they develop vital skills which enable them to build responses in real quick time as there is time constraint on the game to whcih he should comply. As a result, they can time themselves better in a test, perform well under pressure and have a sense of competition. By playing with someone from another country in real-time, they can broaden their perspective of the world and learn about the arts, culture, and music which can be a quite educating experience.
However, children also need to do activities that make them feel relaxed and entertained. Sometimes, playing games like ludo and a car race on a computer is permissible because they might find more fun in these activities. while they might not seem to contribute directly in imparting knowledge, children can develop essential qualities like improved eye-hand coordination and build interest for sports later in their life. What's more, playing sports in spare time is a good exercise which can help students become alert at studies.
Overall, taking part in both activities that make them enjoy themselves and more knowledgeable is equally important for the well-being of young people. They should, however, stay smart and keep from overdoing either one of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2485380117 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6947089855 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0820897848 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159830657862 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609564226913 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224588149368 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103952141513 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201659855722 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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