Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go on the trip
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Sam,
I am writing as a parent to show interest in accompanying my child and other students who are going on an educational tour to France.
As you know, the students of class five who are the participants of this trip have been requested to enquire with their parents if they can come along with them. In his regard I would like to offer my company to the team who are heading on the trip to provide my personal insights into the history of french education systems. From what I know the students will visit the community schools in Paris and will get exposure to a learning experience which I assume will be truly unique for them. my background as an educator in the french education systems might be very useful in explaining to them about the teaching technique employed by the schools and how to make sense of it as learners.
Although, I have some primary information related to this visit, I would like to know few more things such as names of the educational institutions where the group will make a visit. this will allow me to prepare in advance for providing guidance on the tour. I would be grateful if you could provide any additional information regarding the trip and keep a place on hold for me on the group.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 493, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...I assume will be truly unique for them. my background as an educator in the french...
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Line 10, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ions where the group will make a visit. this will allow me to prepare in advance for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65106382979 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5621332782 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2285153512 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181607023059 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068127171081 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434634494495 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095945799256 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202800423477 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.