Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Preserving nature is certainly the toughest thing that most Nations are dealing with. With an exponential increase in number of species getting listed as endangered in recent times, it is already a high time that government should pass laws to protect and preserve nature and wildlife. But, economic gains and preserving nature doesn’t go well simultaneously.
Economic gains often comes with a huge cost of sacrificing nature. In a country like India, with grossing increase in population and unemployment, it is important for the government to focus on the economic gains. Many environmental activists are fighting against the establishment of such industries as they are polluting the environment around it. This not only brings potential harm to animals but also to human beings.
Railways and Highways are often built for economic purposes and the welfare of the people. But these projects are the main reason for deforestations. India is said to have the largest railway connections. Animals are often hit by the trains that crosses these forests. Land is not the only place where animals face threats, there are so many marine animals like “Olive Ridley turtles” added to the endangered species list that are often poached for their medicinal and aesthetic values.
While nature and wildlife should be protected, it is important for a nation to look at the economic gain and sustainability of local residents. One such incident was the “Sterlite Protest” happened in the Tamil Nadu - an Indian state. Where so many activists stood against the government and the Sterlite industry (which was primarily involved in copper manufacturing and smelting) for polluting the river and air around Tuticorin town. This protest got international attention and the company was finally shut down. While this can be huge victory for most environmentalists, India has lost an Industry that was producing about 70% of the copper in India.
As the world is not only for humans and since government can be the only organization to have direct authority to preserve wildlife and economy, it is very important to maintain a fair balance between both preserving Wildlife and improving economy.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum 50
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 50
- In any field – business, politics, education, government – those in power should be required to step down after five years. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...f such industries as they are polluting the environment around it. This not only brings potential harm to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33810888252 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00597500227 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.947096018 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215179808511 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662365008912 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596529327743 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113072331256 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529149841817 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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