Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.What might be be the case?What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

What might be be the case?

What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

Submitted by Doanlinh on Tue, 08/27/2019 - 01:09

Nowadays, startup is more popular. Many people do not work for an employer but have their own business or find job for themselves. There are obviously some pros and cons. In this essay, I will emphasize two drawbacks when they freelance.

First of all, one weakness feature is unstable. For example, most of journalists I know work freelance. Sometimes, they are so busy, besides, they also have stage of leisured. Therefore, their income is not stableness. Whereas, if a company employs them, they will have certan finace. In addtion, they do not receive a lot of interest, such as medical insurance, accident inssurance.

On onther hand, they become lack of human resources. When they begin to startup,their company often have small size. Other is very afraid to apply and lead to limited manpower. This result in a shortage of experience.Making a business viable is difficult.

In conclusion, self-employed is convenient but Some drawbacks be in being. From my point of view, freelancers who are deal with all problems have success.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the journalists') or simply say ''most journalists''.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95655391844 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3651121355 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.6875 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.625 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115096131102 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03308393644 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698443781571 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732952729367 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562403905548 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Many people do not work for an employer but have their own business or find job ...
^^
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...size two drawbacks when they freelance. First of all, one weakness feature is un...
^^^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the journalists') or simply say ''most journalists''.
Suggestion: most of the journalists; most journalists
...kness feature is unstable. For example, most of journalists I know work freelance. Sometimes, they ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
...an resources. When they begin to startup,their company often have small size. Other is...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Making
...This result in a shortage of experience.Making a business viable is difficult. In ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f experience.Making a business viable is difficult. In conclusion, self-employ...
^^
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acks be in being. From my point of view, freelancers who are deal with all probl...
^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing. From my point of view, freelancers who are deal with all problems have succ...
^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...g. From my point of view, freelancers who are deal with all problems have success. ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95655391844 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3651121355 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.6875 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.625 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115096131102 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03308393644 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698443781571 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732952729367 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562403905548 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.