The development of technology has changed our lives greatly. With the help of computers and other digital devices, people nowadays can independently complete more tasks than in the past. While some people choose to become self-employed, others may argue the lifestyle is not an efficient way to live. In this easy, I will discuss the reasons and the negative effects of this phenomenon.
The trend may be caused by two main reasons. Firstly, people nowadays purchasing a different lifestyle than before. In the past, owning a stable job in a big company was important to people. However, to strike a balance between private life and work, some people choose to arrange jobs by themselves in modern society. To be a self-employed person, people can make a decision on what or when they would like to work for. Secondly, many people believe that being self-employed earns more money than the staff of companies. They can complete all the tasks by themselves, saving lots of cost of hiring others. Thus, choosing to be employed by themselves become an obvious trend in today society.
Although the lifestyle seems great, there are some drawbacks. People may earn more money than they did in the company, but need to take the risk of the business cycle. The salary may be unstable or insufficient in a bad economic situation. Besides, without colleagues, self-employees have fewer chances to network with others in the same industry. Also, they may need to solve problems all by themselves. This may cause some bad decision making or poor quality of performance. The negative effects may be carefully considered by people while they choose to become a self-employee.
In conclusion, many people nowadays desire to be their own boss of both their job and life. However, the risk of being a self-employee still need to be concerned before we make a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01935483871 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82253456184 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2151916316 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0952380952 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384058885079 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109515986826 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110809851121 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242684059761 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125405776547 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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