Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose.
Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Today, there are a few zoo in the most parts of countries in the world, but some countries have many zoo in their landscapes. I think tha the zoo have several purposes such as feeding animals, causing more relax for people, improving air qualities, etc. so I do not agree that the zoo has no useful purpose.
First of all, children are important for their families. And, their families consider their young members life qualities. These families focus different kinds of activities for their children's physical and mental health. And, they often want to provide their offspring more fun, for that reason they sometimes go zoo with their children because children of our communities like animals.
Also, people who work in companies or study in universities have many stresses, and their blood pressures usually go up and down, because they do more efforts on their projects or assignments. Although, they need decreasing their stresses down they have to work because they need money. Almost all of these workers of students consider their relaxing after working times. So, they focus different facilities such as playing games, talking with friend, going to zoo too for their relaxing.
In addition, there are many types of plants in the zoo. And, these plants and flowers produce oxygen and they absorb carbon dioxide. Then, our world have pollution caused by people and factories. For that process which producing oxygen by plants, the zoo is necessary for human.
Furthermore, money is important so people would like to earn more money for their life. For taking more money they could do different trade activities. If they need much money they would choose other ways for their salary. And, there are so many places such as cafe, restaurants, and any other ares near the zoo. All of these environments provide people much money. Because many workers work in there.
In conclusion, taking account of all reasons, I think the zoo is important and it is opportunity fo people. So, ı do not agree definitely and clearly that statement given us. So, people who have children should go zoo their free times often for themselves and their family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun zoo seems to be countable; consider using: 'few zoos'.
Suggestion: few zoos
Today, there are a few zoo in the most parts of countries in the w...
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Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'zoos'?
Suggestion: zoos
Today, there are a few zoo in the most parts of countries in the w...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun zoo seems to be countable; consider using: 'many zoos'.
Suggestion: many zoos
...s in the world, but some countries have many zoo in their landscapes. I think tha the zo...
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Line 17, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey for their life. For taking more money they could do different trade activities...
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Line 17, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...environments provide people much money. Because many workers work in there. In co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43903441732 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2031066423 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104661453389 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447136588639 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084080871984 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721484355839 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574332034723 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.