You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sam,
Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. Yesterday I've received your letter in which you are seeking advice on whether to join a college or get a job. I'd recommend you to try to get a job because if you take my example it's very difficult for me now to study and earn together.
As you know I'm doing a part-time job with my study and it's getting hard for me to focus on study. Moreover, I'm getting very tired after my job and sometimes I missed the lectures. Your mom told me that your health is not good while considering your health I'll advise you to find a job and earn money so that you can be financially independent.
Here, I'd like to suggest some jobs for you which you can find very comfortable that is HR management, Clerical, Data Entry Operator, Supervisor. It'll be beneficial for you if you choose anyone job which I suggested to you.
I hope my advice will help you.
Yours Truly
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hello! How are you? I hope this letter f...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...u in the pink of your health. Yesterday Ive received your letter in which you are s...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...whether to join a college or get a job. Id recommend you to try to get a job becau...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...dy and earn together. As you know Im doing a part-time job with my study and...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ard for me to focus on study. Moreover, Im getting very tired after my job and som...
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Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... not good while considering your health Ill advise you to find a job and earn money...
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Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...be financially independent. Here, Id like to suggest some jobs for you which...
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Line 13, column 194, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...beneficial for you if you choose anyone job which I suggested to you. I hope m...
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Line 21, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y advice will help you. Yours Truly Harsimran Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48066298343 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41291661699 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5918333393 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311107810881 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13809046004 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796984230496 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198340366084 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989827843829 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.