Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Technological advancements such as computers have been designed to help humans and make the lives easy. It is generally argued that computers would be the most vital invention of the last century. From my point of view, I completely agree with and the following reasons will shed light on the utmost importance of computer invention. Firstly, this essay will discuss how a working network has been established by computers and secondly, demonstrate the ability of computers to save information.
The first reason in favor of my argument is that computers enhance a supportive working network. For example, with a connected - internet computer, graduates may take advantage of online job recruitment groups to connect with their like-minded peers and recruiters. Furthermore, business owners could keep updated with the work in progress of employees through management software installed on computers, to give recommendations and support them to improve work performance.
Another reason is that computers play an instrumental role in storing information. This is might be explained by the fact that a small and lightweight computer may save thousands or even millions of images, books, songs, etc in a few minutes which might take up much/many spaces and waste such a long time to store and find the right documents when needed. In addition, students may have much more difficulties in carrying plenty of textbooks, notebooks, etc to school by bags rather than bringing their computer along with.
In conclusion, I have a strong belief that computers play an irreplaceable role in the modern world and deserve the most crucial invention of humankind in the last hundred years owing to the benefits of building up working community and great storage access.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32616487455 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9655419025 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8075902135 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179495628204 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714240667045 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491182986 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102588893048 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466312951798 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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