More and more people are buying ready to eat food instead of cocking themselves. Does this development has more advantages or more disadvantages?
With the present lifestyle, people who live in urban areas do not have enough time for food preparation. As a result, it is observed that an increasing number of people are purchasing fast food rather than cooking at home. I think this trend will affect humankind in a negative way.
Undoubtedly, with today's work and responsibilities made people busy, and they do not have time to cook at home. Many working parents opt for fast food for their convenience, and even they buy food for their children, which saves time from shopping for groceries as well as cooking at home. Moreover, it is easy to drive children to eat fast food than homemade meals.
Nevertheless, the increased intake of fast food has many drawbacks. The convenient food outlets, mix unhealthy substances into their recipes to attract the tasty nerves of the community and to keep the food look fresh. For instance, every fried-rice shop owners use Ajinomoto to increase the flavour, which attracts more customers. Even though, these additional ingredients make food tastier, decreases the life expectancy.
Furthemore, high intake of junk food is popular among the school children as most of them are attending after classes. They do not have time to go home and have a peaceful lunch; hence, the only option is unhealthy food. As a result of that, at present, it is observed that many school children are suffering from obesity, which will lead to an unhealthy future generation.
In conclusion, increased buying of junk food is not the right choice by looking at long term adverse effects. Not only that there are long term effects such as obesity but also the life span of people are decreasing due to high consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66841867276 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0027955729 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127874967824 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420594426588 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251050063384 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06810928424 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303540816073 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.