Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get to advantages with the development of air travel.

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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get to advantages with the development of air travel.

The discussion on air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get to advantages with the development of air travel is a debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their arguments. The subject attracts majority of view from people and remain a hot topic among people of concern. In this essay I shall scrutinize both points of view by providing some relevant examples and explanation before drawing any conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one stem from the fact that now days many airplane is increasing time by time which is more good because we can go emergency time quickly one place to other place. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that 80% people do traveling on air plane and some people do want air travel. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming on e is that all people cannot air travel because some people not rich any people poor also they have not money with this they are travel in plane. Besides, 2010 in only 30% people do travel because all people have not more money. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of air travel and people many people do like air travel are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawback should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun airplane seems to be countable; consider using: 'many airplanes'.
Suggestion: many airplanes
...nt one stem from the fact that now days many airplane is increasing time by time which is mor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88727272727 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4938244386 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7522329083 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533824961949 0.242375264174 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220637954257 0.0925447433944 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228953617857 0.071462118173 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353546882645 0.151781067708 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13505931859 0.0609392437508 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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