Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In my perspective, it is of a great importance for teenagers to attend in part-time jobs and start to work in early stages of their life. This can have lots of advantages for children from which they will benefit. In the following I will briefly point to some of the positive and constructive aspects of it which lead me to choose this side in this question.
First, taking part time jobs teenagers will start to get on their own feet and earn money for themselves. Struggling with monetary issues in this age would teach them the necessity of money and earing it. Furthermore, they will learn how to manage their budget and money to use it for their own expenses for instance I have learned how important it is not spend my money on unimportant issues and save it for later more necessary uses when I was working as a delivery guy in pizza shop.
Second, this way they will be fostered to be more independent. Taking a job as teenager and starting to earn their own money, children will learn that once upon time in the near feature they have to be completely independent and would have no means of external financial help. Getting used to this way of life gradually over time from this age plays an important role in their life. It also makes it easy to handle both the financial and emotional problems which they will be encountered when they separating with their parents to live on their own for example.
Furthermore, starting to work for the first time especially, one enters a new course in their life. The children in this age mostly have experienced school environment and have not yet entered a more prestigious and serious one. Starting to work in a social place where lots of people with various characteristics and inclinations is an interesting experience. Children will start to deal with different people and struggle with enormous amount of problem arising both from interacting with them and other issues that they will face.
This was the reasons which makes me believe that taking a job as teenager would have lots of advantages. Thus, I think it would be great for children's own life to be encouraged by their parents to start working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n the following I will briefly point to some of the positive and constructive aspects of it...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... side in this question. First, taking part time jobs teenagers will start to get on the...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... I have learned how important it is not spend my money on unimportant issues and save...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70789473684 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61484680674 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471052631579 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5804010343 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248450061701 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967152580108 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518955687484 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15877099434 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160026381827 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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