There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently,
Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
Describe the problems
explain how these problems are affecting the public
suggest what changes could be made
Dear sir or madam,
I hope this letter finds you well, I have lived in Northern Red street for 4 years and during last 2 months I found the public transport have serious matters which quietly affect every commuter.
Let me explain you in details. you are completely aware as a public transport manager that the quantity of Bus station in this area is less than our vicinities . So all the passengers have to walk for a couple of minutes to find a station. Moreover, Since the population of this area is rising ,in comparison with the buses and taxis amount, we acquire more vehicles to decline the time that a traveler waste while waiting for a car or taxi. Furthermore, all the public transportation vehicles are antique and useless and it be more respectful to local people to been transport in new cars and buses. Your assistance in these matters is greatly appreciated.
Your faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8164556962 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66349045447 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696202531646 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3787264812 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240448369643 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916511680817 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610676304694 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171286294967 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272678336294 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.