An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• offer to find somewhere to stay
• give advice about what to do
• give information about what clothes to bring
Dear John,
it was good to hear from you. Let's catch up when you are in the area. I'm going to give you some whereabouts of the Mumbai city.
Well, there are various places where you can stay. If you'd like a beach view, Novotel hotel maybe a right choice which faces the great Arabian sea. Whereas, few of good hotels are in the city's western region. I can make some phone calls for you.
Remember about the Marine Drive? That should be the first location you must visit when you will be here. Although the night life is great here with lots of lounges and clubs, you can go to Jehangir museum at Kala Ghoda and Juhu beach to rejuvinate yourself. you'd need to be extra careful with the cab driver's fooling you with large fare.
To be honest the climate is humid in the city. you can bring your summer wear like cotton shirts or trouser but it wont be cold as you are imagining. So don't stress about it and can bring some light warm clothes along.
give me a call when your in the city. will see you soon.
All the best.
Mohseen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ohn, it was good to hear from you. Lets catch up when you are in the area. Im g...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Lets catch up when you are in the area. Im going to give you some whereabouts of t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...e various places where you can stay. If youd like a beach view, Novotel hotel maybe ...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oice which faces the great Arabian sea. Whereas, few of good hotels are in the citys we...
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Line 13, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youd
... and Juhu beach to rejuvinate yourself. youd need to be extra careful with the cab d...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
... and Juhu beach to rejuvinate yourself. youd need to be extra careful with the cab d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...onest the climate is humid in the city. you can bring your summer wear like cotton ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s or trouser but it wont be cold as you are imagining. So dont stress about it and can bring ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t wont be cold as you are imagining. So dont stress about it and can bring some ligh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Give
...ing some light warm clothes along. give me a call when your in the city. will s...
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Suggestion: Will
... give me a call when your in the city. will see you soon. All the best. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41116751269 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.80442394846 2.54303337028 71% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3270466967 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1176470588 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5882352941 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0655513492299 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264849165989 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438388591358 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052834036523 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437069848449 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.11 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.