Forests are the lungs of the Earth. Destruction of the world's forests amount to death of the world, we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human lives are directly proportional to the trees which our earth consists of. Yes, of course, we can name them as breathing organs of the universe. deforestation leads to detrimental damage to our mother earth. I completely agree with the above-said statement and this essay will outline reasons for that as the destruction of trees causes global warming which is a threat to humanity and pollution is increasing day by day as there is no tree left to purify the damaged air and breathe.
To begin with, for a decade to the present time there being much of development happening around the cities and urban areas, which is at the cost of taking away trees and occupying the lands. Cutting trees will push us into a series of damages that are irreversible and need to pay huge debts by sacrificing our valuable healths. For example, mumbai ranked top 3 in most polluted areas among 50 comparisons as in mumbai anyone can hardly find a tree. These kinds of damages bring shame to cities at least now governments should take action and avoid deforestation for the sake of developing the nations.
Furthermore, last month amazon forest had damage of more than 40% which was occurred due to global warming and the loss it brought is just unacceptable to the mankind every one is concentrating on growing plants after that incident occurred. No one should wait till its too late to handle the situation. The world is already in paucity of trees at least for the present situation, this has to be protected and carried forward to our future generations
In conclusion, global warming is a threat that needs immediate attention and needs to be curbed at once, growing trees have to be taken as a pledge by every citizen in the country and help in the healthy maintenance of cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Deforestation
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...for the sake of developing the nations. Furthermore, last month amazon forest ha...
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...arried forward to our future generations In conclusion, global warming is a threa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79611650485 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66450174477 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4701480047 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054154086169 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0201437081453 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186210634787 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0314148504467 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314619885597 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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