Most artists earn low salaries and should, therefore, receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?
Some people believe that artists often earn low salaries, so they think that the government ought to give financial support to artists. In my view, I absolutely disagree with this idea owing to the three mains reasons that I will explore in this essay.
Firstly, I would argue that arts are considered to be a great form of entertainment by several people all the world. Thus, this career can bring some benefits for artists due to they can sell their copyright with a large amount of money. For instance, Son Tung MTP as an example, he produces his works, after updating his works on YouTube and selling his CDs. This helps him earn lots of money and can get the impression to foreigners.
Secondly, I believe that the government should give financial support to artists and it can waste money because artists can get money from alternative sources. For example, some artists in the UK and the USA who often paint some pictures or sing their songs on the street which help them show their talents and look for good opportunities or find money from admirers.
Finally, I also think that the government should give public money to help orphan organizations and elderly people rather than support to artists. For this reason, artists still earn money, while young children and older people who do not capable earn money or find jobs. Therefore, governments should give public money to orphan organizations or older people because it could help them improve their life.
In conclusion, I wholly support reject this view because of the many convincing reasons that I mentioned above.
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- The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts on families and societies? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94795539033 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47863133046 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2417923106 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204745803622 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805543908389 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526976807858 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105545254764 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627422782514 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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