transport preferences among young people from different countries
the bar chart compares the proportion of young adults using three kinds of transport from various nations, namely Great Britain, the USA, Germany, and France.
In general, the proportion of people using cars in four countries was highest in comparison with other vehicles.
In particular, Car was more common for commuters than any other means of transport in France, Great Britain and the USA, while an opposite trend can be seen in the figure for Germany.
In more detail, the proportion of the young generation using the car in France was about 75%; however, the figures for Great Britain and the USA are lower (at 60% for both nations). In contrast, just 40% of the total young people use a car in Germany.
In addition, there are 30% of the total young adults in the USA who used a motorcycle, more than 15% compared to Germany.
Moreover, the figures for Great Britain and France are lowest in four nations and had the same percentages (at 10%).
Furthermore, Germany had more young people traveling by bicycle than in other countries than any other means of transport, 30% of young people using the bicycle in Great Britain, but the percentage of young people who use the bicycle in France and the USA are very low, just at 15% and 10% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, while, in addition, in contrast, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76712328767 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46667495041 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4782624246 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186728401264 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923595241172 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704977898774 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094298932381 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07059094685 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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