You had just missed a friend’s part, write a letter apologising and stating reasons why you couldn’t attend the party. Ask how fun it was.

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You had just missed a friend’s part, write a letter apologising and stating reasons why you couldn’t attend the party. Ask how fun it was.

Your task

Dear John,

How are you ? Hope everything is going well. It was a shame that i missed your birthday party last week. I'd apologise about that situation because I know how it was important to be beside you in your special day but i had some reasons that were out of control.

As you surely know, I'm working on my PhD research and I am in the final stage. The day before your birthday, my professor called me and asked to present an initial version of my thesis in Aleppo in the next day. So i had to travel there urgently. I tried to contact you but your phone was unreachable.

So tell me about your party. How fun it was? I'm sure that you were shining as usual. I can imagine how our friends were happy with the music and games that we have planned together.

I've to get off now. When i return from Aleppo I'll arrange a new party to celebrate your birthday.

Best wishes.

Osama

Dear John,

How are you ? Hope everything is going well. It was a shame that i missed your birthday party last week. I'd apologise about that situation because I know how it was important to be beside you in your special day but i had some reasons that were out of control.

As you surely know, I'm working on my PhD research and I am in the final stage. The day before your birthday, my professor called me and asked to present an initial version of my thesis in Aleppo in the next day. So i had to travel there urgently. I tried to contact you but your phone was unreachable.

So tell me about your party. How fun it was? I'm sure that you were shining as usual. I can imagine how our friends were happy with the music and games that we have planned together.

I've to get off now. When i return from Aleppo I'll arrange a new party to celebrate your birthday.

Best wishes.

Osama

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hing is going well. It was a shame that i missed your birthday party last week. I...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...i missed your birthday party last week. Id apologise about that situation because ...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'apologises'.
Suggestion: apologises
...issed your birthday party last week. Id apologise about that situation because I know how...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o be beside you in your special day but i had some reasons that were out of contr...
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Suggestion: I'm
...e out of control. As you surely know, Im working on my PhD research and I am in ...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my thesis in Aleppo in the next day. So i had to travel there urgently. I tried t...
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...ll me about your party. How fun it was? Im sure that you were shining as usual. I ...
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Suggestion: I've
... games that we have planned together. Ive to get off now. When i return from Alep...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...planned together. Ive to get off now. When i return from Aleppo Ill arrange a new ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... get off now. When i return from Aleppo Ill arrange a new party to celebrate your b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26627218935 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21477423533 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8098340372 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.5 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217755607522 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759237802048 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741962930841 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123445799381 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822869557967 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 13.0946893788 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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