Some people say that cars should be banned from the centres of cities.
Do you agreen or disagree ?
It is certainly true that , Private vehicles such as cars have arisen big problems in city centres, some people opine that cars ought be restricted from the centres of city. I fully agree with this statement. There are multiple reason behind to this. Firstly, cars create pollution in a significant amount and due to this phenomenon people face the lot of problems such as asthma, lungs cancer and so on. When individual breathe in polluted air then they definitely tackle with breathing issues. Secondly, noise pollution is not undermined since loud sounds horns badly damaged to ears, yet people become more frustrated and the overall position is that, they are very tense as well as headache is a more common in those people. Furthermore , majority of people do not go out side of the house and keep shut their doors all time.
Meanwhile, maybe they suffer by depression. Another cause is that does not enough space available in city centres. To illustrate, Ludhiana there have a majority of narrow streets and public keep their vehicle here and there, however others continuously faced problems when they pass through behind the streets because it does not have a larger parking area. Afterwards, there have been a some landing facilities in spite of this everyone does not stop their cars in that side
According to me, cars should be banned from the city centres because these creates lot of problems which given bad influenced on the health of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4487694408 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8112795423 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189612248401 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576628377982 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867363556935 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139230178954 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788814929359 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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