Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain, while others say that films also have educational value. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Different people obtain different views about films. As far as I am concerned, watching movies is able to entertain as well as educate people.
Some people hold that watching films is an effective way to relax by keeping in touch with others when they are under great pressure. Not only can they have a date with their friends to watch a movie to ease the pressure, but also they have common topics to talk about the news of actors and actresses in particular often triggers discussion among the public. In addition, people can experience different lives of different people under different social backgrounds, which largely enriches their daily life.
While others argue that movies have educational value. Different types of movies usually enlighten individuals with different methods. For example, a series of films, no matter what types they are, involving growth, death can remind people of the one they love. It makes them cherish the life they have already had. Besides, films can encourage people to strive for their dreams. Some films like the pursuit of happiness inspires a number of people to be persistent, brave, confident and realize their dreams finally. Moreover, movies is a vital instrument for people to remember history and pay attention to their behaviors. For instance, films about wars show people how brutal and horrible when wars are breaking out, so that people will value peace.
In my opinion, watching movies is a good way to get entertained and at same time, people can also get to know new stuff or to be enlightened by certain motifs such as love, peace and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...date with their friends to watch a movie to ease the pressure, but also they have...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...argely enriches their daily life. While others argue that movies have education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in particular, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00743494424 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46737673 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7880750908 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231364128951 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847824762681 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614706231587 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130580555011 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392217678485 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.