You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Mick,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I received your letter last week, I got a smile to learn about your elderly parent's Short trip at my place-Alwar .It will be my pleasure to offer guidance and advice to make their trip memorable.
As you are aware that Alwar has a rich cultural diversity, there are many forts which allur tourists globally; however, I would suggest to visit the most prominent one "The Bala Quila". Apart from this, "The city museum" also popular place for exploring. In addition to it," The tiger reserve" is also the famous place throughout the Alwar.
To make their visit more comfortable, I would suggest hotels like "The Lemon Tree", "The Rajasthan Tourism Hotel"; which offers all modern amenities; is located in the centre of the city. Furthermore, on the they, I can take them to the local market, where they can do some shopping as well as taste some local .
I look forward to your response and seeing them soon!
Best wishes,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Short) must be used with a third-person verb: 'trips'.
Suggestion: trips
... learn about your elderly parents Short trip at my place-Alwar .It will be my pleasu...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rly parents Short trip at my place-Alwar .It will be my pleasure to offer guidance...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...y parents Short trip at my place-Alwar .It will be my pleasure to offer guidance a...
^^
Line 11, column 129, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest visiting'.
Suggestion: suggest visiting
...lur tourists globally; however, I would suggest to visit the most prominent one 'The Bala Q...
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Line 11, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...r place for exploring. In addition to it,' The tiger reserve' is also the fa...
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Line 15, column 225, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...the centre of the city. Furthermore, on the they, I can take them to the local market, w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ome shopping as well as taste some local . I look forward to your response a...
^^
Line 21, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nse and seeing them soon! Best wishes, Ben
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04494382022 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66465806609 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730337078652 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6217603895 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 4.34317383033 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197782859759 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726148382609 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047099639103 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116262509283 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353656121674 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.