a few individuals trust iths goverments responsibility to guarantee that is notionals have a healthy diet.
The importance of a few individuals trust iths goverments responsibility to guarantee that is notionals have a healthy diet. while others trust that it is the people duty.which was always debatable has now become more co0ntroversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject thios notion.the substantial inflience of this trend has sparked the controversy over the pote4ntial impact in recent years.im my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. this eassy will nfurther elaborate both positive and ingative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons will further explian this argument but the most the preponderant one stems from the fact that the many people udestand another pivotal aspect that trend is that..needless to say all these ,erits stand in a good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential infulance of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that.. besides.. hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of a few individuals trust that its governments responsibaility to guarantee that its notional have a bhealty diet, while others trust that it is the peiople duty. are instrumential indeed. nevetheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98594296337 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.168647631 50.4703680194 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.555555556 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264636187705 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140009050167 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.290612600344 0.071462118173 407% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134337179099 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136318270046 0.0609392437508 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.