Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
zoos remain popular places for people to visit for entertainment and to learn about wild animals.Although some individuals believe that putting animals in zoo is cruelty.However, at the same time, a body of opinion claims that zoos play a significant role for the protection of endangered species.this essay will discuss both viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, it is undeniable fact that zoos act as life saviour for the wild animals.In this materialistic world, human beings want more resources and land for serving the ever-expanding population.As a result, animal's habitats are being destroyed through cutting the forests, or through poaching.Due to this, the argument is that zoos can protect these animals that are under the threat.As zoos are managed by the highly trained staff who can ensure the animals are looked after and can produce offsprings.there are examples of successes in this respect, such as pandas, which have been endangered for many years but have been protected.
However, there are more convincing arguments foe why zoos should be shut down.First of all, even though some species are under threat, there are several animals which do not fall into this list and who are there just for the entertainment of visitors.While it may be fun and educational to see them, animals are not meant to be caged , and their pain can often observed in the way many of them pace back and forwards all day.Not only this, if prime reason of zoo is to protect animals, this could ne done in other environments such as wildlife parks which provides more freedom to them.
Hammering the last nail, although zoos are beneficial for wild animals but there are many drawbacks which cannot be ignored.Therefore, zoos should be closed down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16319444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99480918884 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.147848536 49.4020404114 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 371.75 106.682146367 348% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.7667163134 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329086736461 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213591782686 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424557096568 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213591782686 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424557096568 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 13.0946893788 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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