The table below shows figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
This graph chart indicates the number of prisoners in 5 countries including the Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada from 1930 to 1980.
The figures for number of prisoners during the year 1930 and 1940 in Great Britain were same as 30,000. However over the 4 decades, in year 1980, the number of prisoners rose dramitically to 80,000. In Australia, 1970 witnessed the highest number criminals imprisoned amounting to almost 80,000 with the sharp decline in 1980, the figure amounting to 50,000.
In the overall comparison, Newzealand and U.SA reported the exact number of figures as 100,000 in 1930. Over the years, number of prisoners in New-zealand were fluctuating to lower figures in 1940 as well as 1950 and suddenly there was sharp increase in figure increasing to 70,000. In comparison to Newzealnd, the number of prisoners in U.SA kept on increasing slightly from 1930 to 1960 and finally reduced from 100,000 in 1930 to 90,000 in 1980.
Out of all these five countries, Canada has the highest number of prisoners reporting 1,20,000 in 1930 and finally increased to 1,40,000 prisoners in 1980.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15591397849 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66836249408 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510752688172 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7920489274 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13483646365 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761337563122 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028750579702 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929297983855 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116092241577 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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