Tpo 52 agree or disagree societies rules are expected young people more obey strict rules.
On every list of crucial responsibilities of government, endorsing legislation ranks near the top. countries have their own preferred methods and attempt to endorse stringent rules for their people. The controversial question which arises here is whether these rules are too strict for young people obey them or not. If I were to establish laws for my country, I would definitely propose lenient laws. It is my firm belief that gentle legislations are more fruitful for my country for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that strict rules never allow adolescents to think creatively, and most of the time young people have been hampered by these firm laws. As a result, teenagers lose a sense of purpose, so they never strive for their plans meticulously. In contrast, when the government passes rules that are not tough, adolescents generate both short- and long-term goals according to these laws, and they steadily endeavor for their targets to achieve them. my own experience is a convincing answer. Following my graduation from university, I drew up plans to commence a small software development firm. my plan was exceptionally detailed, and I was confident that my business would be a success. However, when I made an effort to inaugurate my profession I perceived, because of difficult legislation in my country I was not qualified to do my job. Therefore, I lost my purpose and never tried to think creatively. Had my country passed gentle legislations, I would have made a breakthrough in my business.
The second remarkable reason is that when the government decides to execute strict laws for countries, institutes, and companies, young people can't relax and they do not relieve their tensions. government aggravates teenager’s anxiety because they are constantly struggling with their tasks to resolve them according to these legislations. Moreover, they can't focus on specific areas of a subject, for they suffer from stress when try to accomplish their tasks. my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. when I was a sophomore student, I was working as an intern at the local magazine that was adjacent to my neighborhood. they expected to obey their strenuous rules that were according to the government legislation. Not only did I get nervous most of the time, but also I lost my concentration when I was engaged with my works. As a result, I abandoned my country to live without anxiety.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that endorsing stringent legislation can be disturbing for the country because young people lose their purposes and never attempt hard like a diligent person for their achievements and because they suffer from stresses and strains, and they can't focus effectively to carry out their tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14649681529 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9980452609 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4203252032 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.391304348 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906397751656 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317143689591 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575268906985 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659493925039 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273032696335 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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