Education is the biggest barrier to my learning – Einstein. What do you mean by this? And do you think Einstein was correct in saying that?
Recently, einstein quote has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "is education biggest barrier to einstein's learning?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is not correct, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the education standpoint, learning methods are bound up inextricably with teaching method, which indicates they lead to both learner' performance and qualification. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between private school and mental capability as well as an exponential increase in average score. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of practical course is correlated positively with not only skilled sutudent but also job opportunity.
Within the realm of public perpective, without the slightest doubt, compulsory education attribute to talent ability, in that it would come down to examination booklet, oral exam, and witten assessment. A salient example of such attribution is academic failure, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take creative imagination for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint traditional teaching methods problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of modern teaching and new assessment.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that einstein's saying is correct. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82509505703 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18548134772 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707224334601 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9524079055 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164967129823 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479222870422 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610822370026 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097879358456 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715022356635 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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