Is tourism in less developed countries advantageous? Discuss your views and give opinion.
Recently, tourism has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "is tourism advantages in less developed countries?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is not beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the economy standpoint, tourism industry is bound up inextricably with private sector, which indicates it leads to both attracting tourist and growing tourism. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between different places and travelling as well as an exponential increase in revenue. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of country's progress is correlated positively with not only investment but also travel agency.
Within the realm of tourism, without the slightest doubt, migration rate attribute to foreigner, in that it would come down to cultural value, national park, and monumental places. A salient example of such attribution is developed country, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take benefit for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint economic recession problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to currency exchange, dollars, and even skyscraper tower. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of advertising, mass media, and government policy for prompting tourism.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of tourism are of more significance in less developed countries. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80918727915 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13949991059 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685512367491 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8774322694 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205169636133 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05652946847 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721556022186 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128013164283 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097599567638 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 55.0591133005 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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