Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is the colossal upsurge in the women work discussion. There is wide spread worry that, it would only lead to myraid of concerns. It can be agreed that, some people believe that women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. While on the other hand stands a perspective that, Other people believe that women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. This essay will elaborate on both side and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there is deluge of argument in the favor of my sentence. The most preponderant one stems from the fact that, women has equal chances to work and excel in their careers. For instance, many countries have women jobs in America, Japan, Russia and other countries so this is very biggest advantages in the world. I personally believe that women has plays an instrumental role in our society.
Nevertheless, their remain some drawbacks, which can certianly overwhelm potential influence of women work and most alarming one is rooted from the fact that, some countries in women has not allowed jobs and do not improve thier careers.
In light of discussion above, it can be concluded that, the impact of women role is prominent and many advantages in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83628318584 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49034866615 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0579943438 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369221753512 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138770900268 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158798621098 0.071462118173 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201903161618 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119162647879 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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