It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
All the people are talented in the world but in their very own way. Some people are fast and work furiously while some people are slow and are curious about everything. And many others do things differently. These are the people that have some innate talents and some that do not. Well, these people could develop perfection through learning and practice.
There is a notion that many are born with special inborn talents. Well, this is certainly true. Many of the sportsmen & musicians are born talented. We can see that these individuals were born with certain skills like good strength, flexibility and some of these are born with a remarkable voice and have had good control over these talents. All of these is possible because of the genes that the individual carries. For example, a good athlete might have gained the strength to be fit and fine from the dominant genes of his parents. As we can see that many of these sportsmen have a family legacy and so he/she has these gifts to excel in their career. Musicians are no different than sportsmen. Many a time even the singers a musical artist have an upper hand in their career as these talents are passed on to them by their family through inherent genes. We could see that a particular family has been very successful in singing, mostly due to the skills they are gifted with.
However, anyone could become perfect in any field of his career with proper guidance and teaching one can cultivate the skills to be a strong sportsman and even gain superior singing skills. There are many times work hard to achieve the skills so that they can be the person they want to be. For instance, an ordinary person is trying to perform in sports. well, he may not. But, with proper channels and learning and with lots of practice he could excel and could see himself standing strong in his career.
People are born with certain talents but they have to work on them, polish their skills to such an extent that they prove themselves. but if they don’t, that talent is wasted. While on the other hand, the people who aren’t born with such talents, they need to work hard. Thus, I conclude that “If you aren’t GOD gifted then you have to gift yourselves”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68434343434 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30912449004 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474747474747 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4491071505 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.652173913 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183239834457 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578860763409 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526133541177 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109130670942 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455565840538 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.