So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts.
Write a response in which you discuss your own opinions on the statement. Decide whether you agree or disagree, and present a persuasive case with clear examples to support your argument.
Seat belts are used for safety reasons in case of accident or as a preventive measure in case of accident. Some would argue that adults should not be legally bound to use seat belt despite know the dangers without using. But others would believe legalizing adult usage of seat belt is compulsory. Life is about subjectivity, after weighing the evidence it is certain that legalizing seat belt for adult is a way.
Those who argue that they should not legalize seat beat feels its their own decision to check, maintain and observe road rules themselves. Their subjectivity is about one is responsible for their well being. Also, some does not feel comfortable using seat belt as it could limit their enjoyment during cruising speed. However, the other think about mishap, unforeseen and un-planned accident with adult can put into considerations.
Now consider the case of high-speed cars such as Bugatti Veron, these cars can solely run at 300Km/h, as such the need for seat belt in highly important due to the speed of the cars. Seat belts imbibe confidence in the driver when driving and gives good impression of road worthiness. Moreover, in as much we value our life and what speed your attend during relative, seat beat will be a norm for all individuals to prevent road accident and as a preventive measure.
Like the recent study conducted by FRSC in 2018, studied shows that government generates high revenue from drivers that default in using seat belts. This shows that even in the process of curbing and reducing accidents causes caused by deterrent in using seat belt, is also another avenue to generate money. Moreover, 80% of the revenue were gotten from defaulters.
In conclusion, though speeding and using of seat belt is relative, legalizing seat belt will curb road accident and increase road worthiness and intern could be an avenue to generate revenue for the government
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| 2019-09-19 | ilumiles | 54 | view |
| 2016-10-21 | Pallavi Sapkale | 41 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Seat belts are used for safety reasons i...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...hey should not legalize seat beat feels its their own decision to check, maintain a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h adult can put into considerations. Now consider the case of high-speed cars...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 318.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98427672956 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54317568671 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5689506043 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172294231101 0.218282227539 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671251367818 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488107176189 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100854370572 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507828063253 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.