In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, however, other students see these courses as less effective than classroom teaching.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?
In recent times, there has been a proliferation of online learning. while some people think it's a chance for many grown-ups to avail themselves of education, others think that education acquired through this means cannot be compared to the traditional classroom setting. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of online programs
There are several benefits of studying over the web. Firstly is the convenience of attending your lectures from any location; so, the student does not need to be physically present in the class to study. Another advantage is the flexibility that this type of school offers, as the student can study at their own pace and this I believe will make learning more interesting and with less pressure. For instance, the student can log on into his course work at any night while he works during the day. Thirdly and more importantly is the individualized learning that e-learning provides. you can engage your tutors personally via e-mails or other platforms provided for such interactions.
Despite these overwhelming advantages, some people think that there are some downsides to online study, chief among which is the absence of classroom interactions. it is thought that this deficiency may lead to the student being unable to work in a team. Furthermore, not all types of courses can be done through correspondence. Courses like Chemistry and some of the sciences requires specialized learning environments like laboratories and workshops.
To conclude, despite the advantages of online education which includes the ease of study, the flexibility it offers and the personalized learning, there are also some negative sides to it like the student not being able to work in a team or study whatever course they want. But in my opinion, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25510204082 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92069147739 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0070368708 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165298205194 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533453143455 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321508135707 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100694162783 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334137839685 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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