You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college and say
– Where is your apartment located?
– When will the room be available?
– What are your requirements for a student to stay there?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Sheena a resident of Scott road a walk in distance to the Fraser valley college. The purpose of my writing is to inform you to rent out vacant space at my preferred place.
Recently my Australian friend moved to her country, owing to which her part of living is vacant and needs to lease out within the students of your prestigious college. Besides, it has single bed, study desk, living area as well as fully equipped kitchen. Moreover, ample space, large backyard with an internet access and all other utilities included in the rent of $700.
Apparently, Jame will left on 25 February then a day after her departure the room is available to be used for occupancy. Furthermore, $500 of damage deposit as well as full month rent have to be submitted in advance as a security.
Lastly, he or she should be non smoker, no pet friendly, party blooper or late night comer.
yours faithfully,
Sheena.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t vacant space at my preferred place. Recently my Australian friend moved to h...
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Line 11, column 23, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...the rent of 00. Apparently, Jame will left on 25 February then a day after her dep...
^^^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tted in advance as a security. Lastly, he or she should be non smoker, no pet f...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...arty blooper or late night comer. yours faithfully, Sheena.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, furthermore, lastly, moreover, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7256097561 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53799210523 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.737804878049 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7690794944 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176843439547 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630743205979 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518225733812 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754318334381 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358106734333 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.