For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
give details on how you have benefited from the club
explain why you want to leave
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Jasmin member of orphanage community from last two years. The reason for my writing is to abandon the club for a further prolonged membership. I feel apology for this sudden decision of opting out my name from the club list.
To be more specific, In the bygone days, I have registered my myself for a golden membership of a local orphanage society. I have served for this club with my full dedication and diligence. Besides, at the beginning I invested $5000 for participating in this volunteer project. Moreover, I used to send monthly amount of 200$ to this organisation.
Significantly, during my membership I have procured multifarious features such as qualities of determination, kindness, serving the society for its welfare as well as helping the needy people. It has increased my moral values and ethics due to which I have joined this club.
Lastly, I have to move to another country for my prosperous career. Overall, I enthrusted with the new job and responsibilities. Also the place would be new to me and for my family. So greatest of my time will be motivated to settle in this new atmosphere. Due to the shortage of time and financial resources I have to quit this club.
I hope you will compassionate enough to understand my problem.
Yours faithfully,
Jasmin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pting out my name from the club list. To be more specific, In the bygone days,...
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Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...eover, I used to send monthly amount of 200$ to this organisation. Significantl...
^^^^
Line 17, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... with the new job and responsibilities. Also the place would be new to me and for my...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, i feel, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95982142857 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04533336849 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.492752862 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4375 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261469149791 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859308054228 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580171394874 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140186346967 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228623770115 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.