Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning."
while everyone adivices that one should be meticuluous while taking any life decisions but IN REAL life it not so. A person would only know his/her strengths when he/she try to cross them. life is never meant to be easy for those who always strive for success and works hard for it. life is a journey which has many ups and downs in its way, one should be ready to face them with courage. being in your comfort zone will never get you where you want to be, you have to get out of your comfort zone to taste success. while there are two kinds of peoples, one those who tries to play safe in every game of life and other those who are willing to take risks or chances.
if being successful is the only goal of one's life then no matter which way they choose, if it takes them where they want then that way is worth taking. but if being careful and cautios while dealing with part of your life dont give you results then you must take some risks. while the success is not guarenteed in any of the ways mentioned neither in taking chances or risks nor in being careful and cautious planner. I totally agree with the author, while its is equally important to be careful while taking any decisions in life but it won't always gives you the desired result you wanted.
it is not always the life's goal taht is important in one's life but the process or journey is equally important too. if at point of life if you are stucked and have no options left then it is better to take some chances in life, while the success is not guranteed but you will get the satisfaction that atleast you tried your best. At some point in life you have to be careful aand cautious while taking any decisions but what if you fail to take that decision just beacause you know that it is not safe bet to be played. you will just end up regretting in life that you haven't taken that decision. For instance, the greatest captains of all time in cricket M.S Dhoni(Indian cricket team captain) was a ticket collector in his early days. Though he had a liking for cricket he could not go and give it a try because of the peer pressure he had from his parents and society. but anyhow he decided to quit the job of ticket collector and give it a try to cricket, if at taht time he would have not taken that risk then India and the world won't be able to experience one of the greatest cricket players. if he would have just gone with the flow and had made some careful decision which at time time would be not quitting his job then he would not be here where he is now today.
All in all, in life sometimes you have to take risks or chances to get the extraordinary result. while it is not true that the persons only who take risk goes on to become successful persons, those who play it safe also gets where they want by their sheer dedication and hard work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 33.0505617978 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33518518519 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06234780375 2.79657885939 74% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.139381818 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.05 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183012354055 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721844630182 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602292378834 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13530808701 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321756263362 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 48.8420337079 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 12.1639044944 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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