WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chartshows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how peoplethink the costs of adult education sh

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WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart

shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people

think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

Submitted by Zoheeba on Mon, 09/23/2019 - 11:43

The date of a survey of adult education presents in two charts. The bar chart illustrates the factors that caused adults to back to school, while the pie chart summarizes the public's opinion about how it should sharing the costs of adult education.

Overall, as it is shown that 40 percent mention to a reason that adults interest in the subject that they determined to go back to school. The followed reason mentioned is the aim to gain qualifications at 38 percent. Turning to three factors, which are good for current jobs, improving prospects of promotion and enjoying learning or studying in school, all of them record less than the earlier reasons by 22 %, 20%, 20% respectively. On the other hand, 12 percent of participants are back to school for able to change jobs and the reason to meet people by 9 percent.

Regarding the costs of sharing, the public's opinion address that adults should cover the about two-fifth from educational fees greatest and second one is the Employer contributes 35%. The Taxpayer is the fewer terms of covering fees, which are only expectedly shared by 25 percent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ool, while the pie chart summarizes the publics opinion about how it should sharing the...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
... Regarding the costs of sharing, the publics opinion address that adults should cove...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70719076664 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6361763233 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250600497008 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106333508419 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106352639216 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192827654225 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118308359473 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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