A young person is going to spend his first day at the office next month. Write a letter to explain what he should do on his first day.
In your letter, you should tell:
– what work should be done in the company
– what he/she will do on the first day of work
– what items/objects he /she needs to take along.
Dear Mr. John,
I am Ell Green and I will be your reporting manager. I am glad to welcome you on board and writing to explain your first day activities.
With regards to the work, our company is the leading IT company across the globe and manufactures network devices and provide solutions to worldwide customers. Being appointed as a developer, you are expected to work diligently and deliver the quality of a product.
As far as your first day activities are concerned, you should attend an induction where you will understand the company policies and process. Later, you will be given the technical documents to read and understand the company product. During the six months of your probation period, Mr. Pardeep Jha will be your mentor and he will guide you in your work-related assignments.
In addition to this, you should carry two passport size photographs and one identification document along with you. Please bring a copy of your joining letter as well for a smooth joining process.
I look forward to seeing you next month.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...the work, our company is the leading IT company across the globe and manufactures netwo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74804082849 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3834718028 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283881314885 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101044553733 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690463466884 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141750633658 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072560696686 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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