In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of large shopping mall which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject of this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my view for favoring both side positive and negative of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most important one stems from fact of this trend is that large shopping mall provide many facilities like cinema, ATM, parking and many more provide the facilities under one roof. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is large shopping mall provide offers and discount. Needless to say, that all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming one is that small shops lose their lively hood and anyone not afford the expensive things. Hence, it is apparent why are many in against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of large shopping mall are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'affords'.
Suggestion: affords
...s lose their lively hood and anyone not afford the expensive things. Hence, it is appa...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun in seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ins'.
Suggestion: many ins
...e things. Hence, it is apparent why are many in against of this trend. According to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20085470085 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61305479715 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9041734873 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.636363636 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151660887786 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617271899519 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065997155274 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105451472627 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416711318329 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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