You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of
flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
• explain where you live
• describe the problem
• give reasons why you do not want this development.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards an urgent matter regarding proposed plan of airport expansion. Through column of your esteemed newspaper, I want to highlight the adverse consequences, which this plan would have upon the quality of living and urban landscape nearby.
My house is walking distance from the airport, facing the runway side. Living in a such a proximity is a challenging situation for us. Many a times, we used to woke up in the middle of night due to high intensity noise of landing flights. The noise level will become unbearable, in case the proposed plan to increase number of flights gets implemented. Moreover, It will add to the sufferings of senior citizens living in the old age home near my residence.
Furthermore, due to expansion, there is high probability of increased traffic load on the main roads nearby. So, in all cases, this development runs counter to interests of local residents. I hope, you newspaper will play a key role in bringing this issue to the notice of civil aviation authority,
Yours sincerely,
Haseeb Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your at...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...living and urban landscape nearby. My house is walking distance from the ai...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...is a challenging situation for us. Many a times, we used to woke up in the middle of ni...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he old age home near my residence. Furthermore, due to expansion, there is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05434782609 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77550362432 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2722106269 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248322973469 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722289686952 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501340087816 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133949092886 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517888375126 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.