the graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Iran between 1960 and 1995.
The graph gives information about the number of people, who suffered from X disease, in iran
over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, the number of patients, who contracted X disease, rose dramatically until the mid seventies, remained constant for 5 years, before dropping to zero in the late 80s.
At the beginning of the period, only 100 cases, who contracted x disease, was
reported in iran. this condition remained stable for 5 years, with figure
standing at same level. An outbreak of X disease occurred in this area, with
figure rising dramatically to 500 cases in 1975.
For 5 years from 1975, no changes were seen in the number of cases of X disease. Suddenly, a dramatic dropping was reported in iran about the number of cases of X disease. this trend continued until 1990 when iran was free of this problem. From this time to end of the period iran transmitted X disease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
... who suffered from X disease, in iran over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995....
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reported
... cases, who contracted x disease, was reported in iran. this condition remained stable...
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Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...cted x disease, was reported in iran. this condition remained stable for 5 years, ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Standing
...ained stable for 5 years, with figure standing at same level. An outbreak of X disease...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Figure
...X disease occurred in this area, with figure rising dramatically to 500 cases in 197...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...about the number of cases of X disease. this trend continued until 1990 when iran wa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81132075472 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5933617368 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6345648198 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220988493274 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939413262373 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071924845378 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898490773351 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062221262364 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.