Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree.
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that, whether people should paid tax for the betterment of the nation or keep them all for personal expenditure. A lion's share of the society favours it, however the rest goes adverse it. I complete disagree with the view, In my opinion, people should paid tax to state to improve its infrastructure, defense and education system. The following paragraph's would elucidate my personal perspective along with an apt example.
I do not see eye to eye, with the central idea for various reasons. First of all, if people do not pay any taxes then the government have no treasury. Consequently, the government will not able to build any roads, highways, school and colleges. The will have to depend on private sector to build these thing and its make them more expensive. For example, medical facilities in private hospital are very expensive then government hospitals. As a result, poor people can't afford better treatment and even die without treatment. In addition, if education is only maintain private sector then only rich people are educated poor people remain uneducated.
On the flip side of the coin, some critics go against the above discussed assertions. Firstly, some people claim that levying taxes is unfair and they deserve to keep all their legitimate income to themselves because they fight every single minute for it. High taxes can not only stifle the motivation of individual workers but also exert a negative effect of penalizing hard work. More concerning situation, however, is that with all taxpayers’ money accumulated, the government, albeit even an elected one, could misuse or even become corrupted, not to mention those authoritarian ones. In this case, it is better to keep the money to their own instead of anyone else
In conclusion , after pondering over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with my self . I come to this conclusion that we must pay tax . it is our duty for our society and ourself . we can contribute in our country’s progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06158357771 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81103535459 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5808103967 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8421052632 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245748749717 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601174428543 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729677651276 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122013656618 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580404963981 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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