The chart below gives information about how people aged25-34 are housedin the UK.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,Do not give youropinion, just the facts.and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the percentages of young people who live in rented housing or are owner-occupiers in UK from 2004 to 2014 . From the first glance at the data, the home owners are likely to go down while the renters are likely to go up.
Taking a closer look at the bar chart, we can see a opposite trend. Within a decade, the ratio of home owners fell down considerably from just under sixty to just over one in three. Besides, the proportion of renters was around twenty percent in 2004; however, this percentage reached an high over ten years, with a rise of about a half. In addition, in two years, 2011s and 2012s, the number of young people buying houses and renting houses was approximately value. But only two years later, what can be drawn out is that the popularization of buying house was replaced by renting house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bout the percentages of young people who live in rented housing or are owner-occu...
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Suggestion: .
... owner-occupiers in UK from 2004 to 2014 . From the first glance at the data, the ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...loser look at the bar chart, we can see a opposite trend. Within a decade, the ra...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, the proportion of renters was around twenty percent in 2004; however, this pe...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... 2004; however, this percentage reached an high over ten years, with a rise of abo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'valued'.
Suggestion: valued
...es and renting houses was approximately value. But only two years later, what can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, look, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53602813296 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0909277683 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811979648948 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378661556908 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474179241723 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703550427084 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237301951093 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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