The chart below gives information about how people aged25-34 are housedin the UK.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Giving is the bar chart illustrating information about how people aged 25-34 reside in the UK.From the first glance of the chart we can realize that there has been a gradual decrease in amounts of home owners, as opposed to the number of renters which has a progressive increase from 2004 to 2014.
Taking a closer look at the chart, what can be drawn out is that the percentage of people who possess house reaches the peak of 60 percent in 2004, whereas this is the bottom rate in group of people who rent house with just 20 percent. After a decade, the highest is replaced by renters with over 45 percent and the lowest is home owners with below 40 percent. In addition, there is no change in proportions of both two groups from 2011 to 2012 with approximate 43 percent of home owners and about 41 percent of renters. On top of that, having a look at 2013, it is obvious the ratio is reversed and the amounts of renters is higher than one home owners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, whereas, in addition, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37078651685 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29887887574 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3915657294 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.6 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127983464593 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615560690268 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075289569319 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127109000762 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813511732095 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.